Open Poetry #29 |
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Unfamiliar |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
We are unfamiliar to this edge of understanding. As if we stand between questions that hang to the weight of their own grave importance. Answers are always more than they may seem. Perhaps a shadow lies in a pool of truth...and light is merely casting borders? Where do we fall when our last step has brought us to no reason? The edge is always sharp and sudden. And the unfamiliar belongs to every breath released. In time...this - May be our only understanding. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It is a decidedly sharp edge, understanding, but when one is very careful with it... it opens a whole new world. Well done, Eric! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ericc Good thoughts, good write, good read. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Questions . . . Questions are more important than answers. I was continually asking myself this morning, "where is the edge of the scaffolding, where is the edge of the roof?" The truth of the answers was evident. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Where do we fall when our last step has brought us to no reason? The edge is always sharp and sudden. And the unfamiliar belongs to every breath released." wow, very intense and emotionally charged.... ![]() |
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Kaoru![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Loved this.. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (sigh) The great beyond is no state of mind, and falling from the precipice can sure have its rewards! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Excellent plate of thought you feed us. Nicely said, thanx Eric. |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
loved this. Good job, Eric! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn, that's deep |
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