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KoKo
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since 2003-02-15
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Inside the shadow's shadow

0 posted 2003-10-28 08:59 PM


It's not
That you don't
Make me happy

It's that
I was never happy
To begin with.

© Copyright 2003 Lauren - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-10-29 01:06 PM


This is so sad yet beautifully written.

Cold hands means a warm heart

KoKo
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since 2003-02-15
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Inside the shadow's shadow
2 posted 2003-10-29 04:27 PM


Thank you
whispering wind
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since 2003-08-18
Posts 45

3 posted 2003-10-29 09:32 PM


Wow its amazing how the sadest things can be written in the most beautiful ways.
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
4 posted 2003-10-29 10:22 PM


Within your shadow's shadow lies such sadness... I'm sending you some rainbow light to banish the shadows and bring joy into your life!

Swoosh, swoosh, magic wand,
KoKo's shadows, begone, begone!



EA

KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow
5 posted 2003-10-30 06:15 PM


WW -

Thanks

KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow
6 posted 2003-10-30 06:16 PM


Linda:

Aaaaaw thanks!!! You're a sweetheart

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