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Atrum Mortalis
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since 2003-10-28

Posts 9

0 posted 2003-10-28 08:09 PM

There goes another vagrant soul,
Wondering what will make them whole,
The truth be told,
They will never break the mold,
They are doomed to walk this earth in pain,
Ever pondering their disdain,
Haha it's not a shame that they are all the same,
Because they all carry a friend on their shoulder called Mr. Apathy,

Mr. Apathy wants you to think about dying,
He wants your mind to give up trying,
He wants you to love your crying,
He wants you to keep on lying,

Mr. Apathy is here to stay,
It doesn't matter who prays,
Their souls are going to be tortured for the rest of their doomed days,
It's Mr. Apathy's job to make them think about what everyone says,

Mr. Apathy is here to stay,
It doesn't matter how many people pray,
Because you're going to die one day,
And your soul will belong to Mr. Apathy and it don't matter how much money
you pay,
He will make sure people forget what you say,

He comes to kill and destroy their life,
Because he loves stirring up strife,
Why?
There is no why you fool,
Because life only has one rule,
And that's keep on dying and trying to understand life in vain,
You existence will eventually wane,
And Mr. Apathy will be the same,
Because Life is really Mr. Apathy's name.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-10-28 08:18 PM

A very strong write, Atrum. Welcome to Passions. I hope you've had time to look around and get a feel for our world. Your outlook will be quite interesting to watch. Looking forward to more.

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Atrum Mortalis
New Member

since 2003-10-28

Posts 9

2 posted 2003-10-28 08:21 PM

thanx sunshine

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-10-29 11:54 PM

(big hugggsssssssss) This is a sad but powerful debut, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I sure hope Mr. Apathy can find Clarity and become the Half Full Prince, yay! That's a powerful slice of life, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Paul, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much, and be sure to check your E-mail for a very special greeting from all of us here at Passions just for you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paul, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-29-2003 11:55 PM).]

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2003-10-29 11:59 PM

There goes another vagrant soul,
"Wondering what will make them whole,
The truth be told,
They will never break the mold,
They are doomed to walk this earth in pain,
Ever pondering their disdain,
Haha it's not a shame that they are all the same,
Because they all carry a friend on their shoulder called Mr. Apathy"

Loved those lines and know of what you speak..

Welcome to Passions!

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2003-10-30 12:06 PM

Mr. Apathy wants you to think about dying,
He wants your mind to give up trying,
He wants you to love your crying,
He wants you to keep on lying,
********************************
Well, if he were really apathetic he would not care
whether you cried, lied, died
or not...

right?
a good write, enjoyed the pondering

WELCOME!

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

6 posted 2003-10-30 04:58 AM

Very True And Touching Poem~!~

I'd Rather Be Hated For Who I Am Then Loved For What I'm Not~!~

Much Luv,
~!~"Trina"~!~

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

7 posted 2003-10-30 05:46 AM

There goes another vagrant soul,
Wondering what will make them whole,
The truth be told,
They will never break the mold,
They are doomed to walk this earth in pain,
Ever pondering their disdain,
Haha it's not a shame that they are all the same,
Because they all carry a friend on their shoulder called Mr. Apathy,

Strong write Atrum. Welcome to Passions and I hope you enjoy your time here.

Mary Ann
Member

since 2003-04-23

Posts 111

8 posted 2003-10-30 07:40 AM

Very powerful and thought provoking

.....thank you for the terrific read.....

God bless,

~MA~

ambrish
Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 257
India

9 posted 2003-10-30 07:48 AM

Mr. Apathy wants you to think about dying,
He wants your mind to give up trying,
He wants you to love your crying,
He wants you to keep on lying,

truly said but we have to defeat apathy by being sympathetic.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

10 posted 2003-10-30 08:02 AM

Atrum,
Well done, enjoyed the read.

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