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.....long, cold winter.....
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.....long, cold winter..... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 I beg the night be still ask of the stars dim in hopes of squelching memories that stir..... Fall is hurried this year and brings with her bustle too many echoes upon the chilled night air I listen wistfully and damn my heart for it’s weakness .........it’s going to be a long, cold winter ~SEA~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Susan...perfectly beautiful! Gawd I have missed reading you! Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very beautiful Sue, the mood sets very well with the work itself and blends nicely with the ending. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I beg the night be still ask of the stars dim ===================== love that opening.... -------------- too many echoes upon the chilled night air I listen wistfully and damn my heart for it’s weakness .........it’s going to be a long, cold winter ====================================== which is exactly why we need to live on the beach   A bittersweet beauty Sea-girlie You're the color of the sky reflected in each store-front window pane ... |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
this hurt..too close to home many of my memories lie in the fall..nice to read you again |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
It's so nice to see SEA...and to read. |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Beauty that travels on stringed instruments came to mind while reading this. Well I guess that means a symphony. Lovely!  Love, Terri~  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Fall is hurried this year and brings with her bustle too many echoes upon the chilled night air I listen wistfully and damn my heart for it’s weakness *Cringe* yep I know, and I love how you write! You do my heart good, SEA gal! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I could use a little cold right now...James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSEA~ This is one of those connect our souls pieces~ Yes ... yes~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Susan, this is beautiful, sweet friend, it might be a long, cold winter but it doesn't mean it has to be harsh as you can harp warmth to the season! (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Susan Susan . . . in your weakness you breed love however painful I know beautiful writing xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes it is just beautiful, very touching |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
My stars, Susan. There just ain't nobody that can write like that but you..Wonderful...very gentle smile |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
indeed, it is good to read you again. |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
i need some cold  |
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