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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2003-10-28 11:34 AM

In the Month of Remember

What does it hurt then,
Remembering ~

Seems quite innocent
If we chance upon
A moment

In the month of remember,
A dateless time,
With only a pen to guide us
Only a page to inspire

A moment
Unsurpassed as never before
Or ever will be,
Again.

So I ask you,
What if
We take a lifetime of
Remembers
Encapsulate them
Into this Moment

And make it

A

Life’s span…

Would you love with me there?

~*~

With thanks for the inspiration
to Janet Marie and Martie,
for a poem, and a comment…

I shall never forget.

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (10-28-2003 11:37 AM).]

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2003-10-28 11:36 AM

AHHH.......soothing to the soul....very beautiful sunny lady!!

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-10-28 11:39 AM

So beautiful, SunnyOne.....
and what would we do without memories...
the good ones, that is.

Hugs, my friend

Ethel

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-10-28 11:47 AM

"So I ask you,
What if
We take a lifetime of
Remembers
Encapsulate them
Into this Moment

And make it

A

Life’s span…

Would you love with me there?"

You are remarkable lady...
and you know I love you!
Hugs~

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2003-10-28 11:58 AM

Karilea....Love is forever or a minute...as Michelle said...it is infinity. She was smart, I believe her.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-10-28 12:48 PM

nice ending to a melancholic write

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

6 posted 2003-10-28 01:40 PM

Wow I would like to hear this one read out loud. Lovely this was!
Terri~

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

7 posted 2003-10-28 02:09 PM

"So I ask you,
What if
We take a lifetime of
Remembers
Encapsulate them
Into this Moment"

stunning, this is

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

8 posted 2003-10-29 08:15 AM

Karilea~

I am speechless....with complete awe...

Lauren~

Will the wind ever remember the names
it has blown in the past with
its crutch its old age and its widsom
it whispers no this won't be the last

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

9 posted 2003-10-29 08:24 AM

oooh Karilea a good thing to question and if unconditional then yes
Dont want to remember all of the scary
ones like that . . . *smile*
but the good one definitely
Much Love
Sue
xxoo

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

10 posted 2003-10-29 08:31 AM

Sunshine,
Lovely,

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

11 posted 2003-10-29 08:41 AM

Wonderful!!

believe in what your heart feels...

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

12 posted 2003-10-29 09:22 AM

The answer to that is always yes...beautiful work here, poet lady!

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EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

13 posted 2003-10-29 10:38 AM

Okay I will make it a life to remember. I love this piece Sunshine. It was a great read...and my eyes greedily ate up every word 'til the last had been taken in. Wonderful!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

14 posted 2003-10-29 04:27 PM

So I ask you,
What if
We take a lifetime of
Remembers
Encapsulate them
Into this Moment

And make it

A

Life’s span…

Would you love with me there?

A life's span... ought to be just enough. *S* Beautiful work, lady! *S*

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

15 posted 2003-10-29 05:14 PM

nice read

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

16 posted 2003-10-29 10:05 PM

With only a pen to guide us
Only a page to inspire

A moment
Unsurpassed as never before
Or ever will be,
Again.

So I ask you,
What if
We take a lifetime of
Remembers
Encapsulate them
Into this Moment

And make it

A

Life’s span…

Would you love with me there?

================================

No dear poetess of the sun--it is I that thanks you.

You're the color of the sky reflected in each store-front window pane ...
You're the whispering and the sighing of my tires in the rain.

J. Browne

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