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Bonfirelight
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 85
London, England

0 posted 2003-10-28 04:49 AM


Late nights and Codeine dreams
Waking up wrapped in your sleeves
and you...
you're still gone

We've moved on

Both settled, both smiling
A low moment from dialing
A whim from amending
A sin from descending
To you
And it passes

I Start to forget
Forget to remain
To remain in your memory
Or remember your name

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GG
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since 2002-12-03
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Lost in thought
1 posted 2003-10-28 05:00 AM


I know all about codeine dreams...
Well written.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2003-10-28 05:09 AM


sad stuff
mytuesdaywishes
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since 2003-09-05
Posts 254
a voice from the musicbox
3 posted 2003-11-01 12:54 PM


i love this one, i don't know why other than the fact that it's real...it doesn't try to be poetic, it just is

i think that it's brainless to assume that making changes to your window's view will gain a new perspective.

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2003-11-01 01:24 PM




(big hugggsssssss) I send many angel hugs your way, sweet friend, forgetting to remember to forget, and so on, is truly devastating, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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