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Yet Another Day
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Yet Another Day |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Yet Another Day Look into my eyes and you will see borrowed words, those that softly crumble and mix until mine are no longer mine and the reign of memories quiets the sins left to wander in the grayness of a mind stained by the burden of thought, knowing that once I had the moment of truth before me, and I let it slip away. I can never escape myself, nor the songs of another... like the jewel I wear around my neck, I am touched daily, its warmth resting there... where my heart's rhythm pulses always aware with an everlasting love, inside, pressing me on to another day, always gifting me with a lifelong friend, a sister, sharing horoscopes, searching for reason, hoping for a transformation to alter the blindness felt through eyes lost in their deepest brown. We share the night, the demons that haunt, innocense stripped, waiting for that final call. And as I fade into the darkness, I remember the laughter, the teasing, her beautiful voice in song, and how I wanted to be like her in almost every way. We are so different, yet of the same heart, both reaching out to others, despite our needs and would rather bandaid our hurts than watch another bleed. I am embraced by new views, my abilities lost on the challenges before me, unanswered questions now meaning less, my failures wrapped around me craddling me in the only comfort I know and words, my only habit, that ride me into tomorrow, surrendering me into prayer that the sun will appear, and we will get to share yet another day. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"and words, my only habit, that ride me into tomorrow, surrendering me into prayer that the sun will appear, and we will get to share yet another day." Amen...and I pray this for you too. This is beautiful, Maureen. Hugs to you, my friend...  When the power of love overcomes the |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
absolutely beautiful,,,, |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I am embraced by new views, my abilities lost on the challenges before me, unanswered questions now meaning less, my failures wrapped around me craddling me in the only comfort I know and words, my only habit, that ride me into tomorrow, surrendering me into prayer that the sun will appear, and we will get to share yet another day. Powerful wise words spoken my friend....wishing you the best, and yet, with a heart and desire as such, you will forever be a success, your belief is incredible and you are the only one that can make you happy. Thank you for sharing these words with all of us...as they are balm to the heart mind and soul! Hugs....Lee J. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Maureen: what a beautiful hymn . . . I can never escape myself, nor the songs of another... like the jewel I wear around my neck, I am touched daily, its warmth resting there... where my heart's rhythm pulses always aware with an everlasting love, inside, pressing me on to another day, always gifting me with a lifelong friend, a sister, sharing horoscopes, searching for reason, hoping for a transformation to alter the blindness felt through eyes lost in their deepest brown. and quite the blessing, in return Beautiful xxoo |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Maureen, this is beautiful, as all of your poetry is. I'm sending this back for another round.  Hugs Ethel |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
We are so different, yet of the same heart, both reaching out to others, despite our needs and would rather bandaid our hurts than watch another bleed. There should be many days yet to share for hearts such as these... this world needs more of them. *S* |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Eloquent...and profound.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Yet another day...but not just another day. This is so special not only the poem, but the inspire behind it. *HuGS lovely lady. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This is great.May you both revel int he beauty that you two share is a bond that can't be broke.  Crystal |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we are all so different yet it is a miracle we can all touch and each one another and may such a special bond forever be encased in gold within you! (sigh) This is special, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Goodness, I swear you read my heart and mind. This is so emotional and it leaves me without the real words. They have escaped me, honestly. Incredible, incredible write! Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. |
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