Open Poetry #29 |
The Sand |
Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
The Sand It looks so simple like sand pouring slowly down an hourglass and oh I do wish it but it is so much harder time is merely the glass; I have to be the sand. [This message has been edited by Ratleader (10-27-2003 05:40 PM).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This was definitely worth waiting for, my friend... the format is spectacular... the poem defines beauty. *S* I don't know how you do it... but I'm sure glad you do! *S* |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
There.... that's better. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Ed Your words and presentation were marvellous. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed...Very thoughtful in form and meaning. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
wow, that was worth waiting around for! love that format! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
excellent both format and sentiment |
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