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Open Poetry #29

The Sand

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

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0 posted 2003-10-27 05:35 PM

The
Sand

It looks so simple
like sand pouring
slowly down an
hourglass
and
oh
I
do
wish
it           but
it                  is
so                     much
harder                    time
is                          merely
the                          glass;
I
have to
be the sand.

[This message has been edited by Ratleader (10-27-2003 05:40 PM).]

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 2003-10-27 05:39 PM

This was definitely worth waiting for, my friend... the format is spectacular... the poem defines beauty. *S*

I don't know how you do it... but I'm sure glad you do! *S*

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

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2 posted 2003-10-27 05:39 PM

There.... that's better.

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Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

3 posted 2003-10-27 05:39 PM

Hello Ed

Your words and presentation were marvellous.

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2003-10-27 07:32 PM

Ed...Very thoughtful in form and meaning.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2003-10-27 07:46 PM

wow, that was worth waiting around for!
love that format!

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

6 posted 2003-10-27 09:28 PM

excellent both format and sentiment

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