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SPUD
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0 posted 2003-10-27 04:53 PM


The little china girl retches
her saline spirit dry
here we go then
we're all going to die
dissappearing day trippers
sat on our hands
gripping the deck
blinking short our memories of life
our little pendulous boat
hypnotized
we swallow our regrets
why that last beer why
and the little china girl retches
too weak to open her eyes.
Our mood was bouyant earlier
choking on our giggles
snorkelling the reef
wowing the pretty fish
we're all going to die
smeared all over the coral
that we chipped with flippered feet
the pretty fish will nibble.
We continue to grip
crushed by our silence
heavy in our seats
and the little china girl retches
drowned in leather mans jacket
his big numb arm encircles her waist
the black strings of her hair
have tied her to his face.
We're all going to die
from the roaring guffaws of our captain
rolling our spineless heads
from side to side
chins pressed to chests
we need a stretch of sky
and the little china girl retches
her sickness rises on the swell
our gaze lifts hopefully
triumphant unwell
conquer natures domain.
So this is it then
the peuk is lost to the ocean
we never see it again.

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Gaia
1 posted 2003-10-27 05:11 PM


Now you made me almost lose my beer!
Some vivid imagery, Spud, reminded me of a storm tossed fishing trip in Ensenada, Mexico many years ago. Even the captain lossed his cookies that day.
Enjoyed the tied-up face/hair lines.

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