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Open Poetry #29

Life is...............

fun_freak
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since 2003-09-19

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0 posted 2003-09-24 03:07 AM

It’s about the decisions we make,
The challenges we take,
The happiness we share,
And the pain we bear.

It’s about laughter and tears,
Our freedom and fears,
Friendship we intend to treasure,
Which time cannot measure

It’s about mistakes we make,
Through it, the lessons we take,
Miracles which touches us,
Destroying our sadness.

It’s about love we found,
Happiness’ to our heart it bound,
It’s about war and destruction,
New hope, peace and constructions.

If death ever comes to stay,
It too is a part of life,
However the very end,
Though the beginning of another.

I really do love writing poems in my spare time. This one is about LIFE would really appreicate if you could give me feedback on the same.Constructive critcism can really help amateur poets like me.Thanks

QjQ
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