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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-10-27 12:50 PM

Poets In Love

I live so
vicariously through
your tender eyes
and watch
as color
overcomes
blank canvas
new pigment
mixed with
past teared words
to explode in
uncontainable joy
brushing the edges
bringing echoes where
silence use to be

"Tough times never last...tough people do." carol gardner

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-10-27 12:54 PM

it is a beautiful thing

nicely done lady

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-10-27 02:07 PM

*smile*

I'm claiming this . . .
I was first nah nah
My God . . Helen
beautiful writing
to see love as this:

as color
overcomes
blank canvas
new pigment
mixed with
past teared words
to explode in
uncontainable joy

is a gift in itself
your words . . are love
*smile*
xxoo

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2003-10-27 02:44 PM

Helen, you did a good job
commemorating what you see
through another's eyes...

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

4 posted 2003-10-27 04:38 PM

Helen,
==================
new pigment
mixed with
past teared words
to explode in
uncontainable joy
==================

And some of us know by experience how possible it is. So very well done!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

[This message has been edited by Larry C (10-28-2003 07:02 PM).]

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

5 posted 2003-10-27 06:45 PM

Lotus Breeze
Member

since 2003-09-06

Posts 112

6 posted 2003-10-27 07:13 PM

I need to look in dictionary for word “vicariously”, now I think many of us do this. Thank you for teaching new word with good poem

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

7 posted 2003-10-27 07:16 PM

"I live so
vicariously through
your tender eyes"

Rf

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2003-10-27 08:16 PM

as color
overcomes
blank canvas
new pigment
mixed with
past teared words
to explode in
uncontainable joy

Oh my God, Helen.....this is it exactly!!
I'm claiming it too, Sue......

LOL
I hope that's okay, Helen.
Hugs

Ethel

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

9 posted 2003-10-27 10:46 PM

Vicarious? perhaps, but you KNOW love Helen...It shows in everything you write!
~Ed

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

10 posted 2003-10-27 10:52 PM

...and my brush touches the canvas with a life of it's own, unguided by this hand of mine, because the picture it paints . . . is you.

Beautiful piece, dear friend, as are they all ... jwesley

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

11 posted 2003-10-28 01:13 AM

Helen, you have penned a poem speaking divine truth!

There is nothing like two poets in love
being, feeding from the inspiration of one to the other...

~ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

12 posted 2003-10-28 06:10 PM

hello lovely lady..

Nice to see you again.

Very wonderful to be able to read your writing even a little bit.

Miss our chats

I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU!

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