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wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

0 posted 2003-10-27 11:35 AM

She has ways
I found
to make a man recall
and recount
that, which made him

she has a way
of taking him back
to the time of Agoge
to thank his mentors
for what he has learned

She has ways
I found
of waking a man
to all he once was
and could be again

"In looking Northward, I see a light"

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-10-27 11:42 AM

This is so true. Liam told me a few nights ago I taught him too love again. Awesome poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-10-27 11:51 AM

'She has ways..'

Love this thought... *sigh*

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2003-10-27 11:51 AM

Sometimes it takes a tenderness to bring out the best in us, like a rose being coaked to bloom by the sun? I think that could be the case here Yeti buddy o'mine. Such a tender write she squeezes from you

Carpe' Diem

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2003-10-27 11:55 AM

It happens
sometimes...
but especially
to the chosen few.

~*~

Smiling smiling smiling....

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

5 posted 2003-10-27 12:06 PM

Just wanted you to know I am reading...

I just don't want to respond because I feel like I am intruding..

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-10-27 12:22 PM

I recall
the first time you touched me
silken threads like sable
horsehair hindsight,
mine to see yet to feel
like the soft summer breeze
upon my bare chest
your soul
danced for me
in circles and pirouettes
twirling this fine instrument
playing me, with strings
and I
sang sweetly, angelic
within that chorus
of sable and soul
I found myself
within your beauty

It DOES not get any better than this . . .
I do love you so . . .
xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (10-27-2003 12:23 PM).]

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

7 posted 2003-10-27 12:23 PM

i have to go to wal/mart for more tissues...h

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

8 posted 2003-10-27 12:25 PM

Thank you all for sharing in this with us...it's why we post these....to celebrate our "becoming" with our friends.

And baby? mmmmmmmm, wanna?

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

9 posted 2003-10-27 12:32 PM

sniffling, within my smiles

nothing more wonderful under the stars, the moon, the sun
than love in full bloom

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2003-10-27 12:39 PM

tis beautiful

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

11 posted 2003-10-27 03:10 PM

get some coffee? yes yes I do . . .
*smile*

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

12 posted 2003-10-27 03:26 PM

"to be continued"

smile.

I lift my own coffee cup in celebration.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

13 posted 2003-10-27 05:03 PM

She has ways
I found
of waking a man
to all he once was
and could be again

I believe so.

A wonderful write Brother Ed

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

14 posted 2003-10-27 08:34 PM

These 3 poems make a person have faith in love again. I'm smiling from ear to ear here!

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

15 posted 2003-10-28 10:53 AM

She has ways
I found
of waking a man
to all he once was
and could be again.

My Kathleen would love this.

enjoyed.

poe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

16 posted 2003-10-28 10:55 AM

try it again

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

17 posted 2003-10-28 10:57 AM

one more time

KristieSue

Senior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

18 posted 2003-10-29 07:52 PM

ohhhhhhhhh my god...I'm just going to sit here and sigh...and wipe tears all stinkin' night!

beautiful!

Ya know what they say. Curiosity salted the snail.

rambling_words
Junior Member

since 2003-10-29

Posts 44
London, Ontario, Canada

19 posted 2003-10-29 07:57 PM

This was great, I really liked it.

John

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

20 posted 2003-11-05 01:56 AM

*grinning from ear to ear*

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