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Jes
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since 2003-10-21
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Denmark

0 posted 2003-10-27 07:39 AM


Laugh cry laugh cry...
But when do we begin to think.

Be quiet scream be quiet scream...
But when are we allowed to be.

Jump sit jump sit...
But when can we run.

Look see cry smile laugh have fun enjoy....
But when do we live a life.

Smile

Jes

This was abit for fun but i found out it tells alot i think.


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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2003-10-27 07:46 AM


Jes,
Yes it does, enjoyed the read.


Mary Ann
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since 2003-04-23
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2 posted 2003-10-27 07:47 AM


Very thought provoking   I may have misread it, but sometimes life requires us to react conventionally in so many circumstances we never really live as and for ourselves...it would be nice sometimes to just forget societal expectations..  

thank you for the great read..

God bless,

~MA~

[This message has been edited by Mary Ann (10-27-2003 07:48 AM).]

Jes
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3 posted 2003-10-27 07:55 AM


Thanks seymour.. always welcome

Thanks to you too Mary Ann, and nah i dont think you misread it smile, sometimes we wish for just to run and be only us for abit and live.

Smile

Jes


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