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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2003-10-27 07:25 AM

I Seek

I seek a rainbow bubbles flight
Within the rubble of the night
A dance within a wished for wile
To answer callings of my dial

I seek it with a passions flute
Within my call and birthday suit
To chance with me old natures dance
A leap of joy and some romance

I would it in a pantomime
The very first of aging time
A bubble on a wayward thrust
To burst upon a touch of lust

But bubbles come and bubbles go
And non return the same and so
My seek has gone a widows walk
And turned into a shadows stalk.

So now I walk an aged seem
And do my stalk within a dream.

Jes
Member

since 2003-10-21

Posts 422
Denmark

1 posted 2003-10-27 07:30 AM

If i read this rightit seems tome like lonely and said...... the search for love.

Smile

Jes

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2003-10-27 07:34 AM

Jes
That's about it.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2003-10-27 07:59 AM

A bubble on a wayward thrust
To burst upon a touch of lust

But bubbles come and bubbles go
And non return the same and so
My seek has gone a widows walk
And turned into a shadows stalk.
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I'm smiling at you for all the word play and witty verbiage in this...
So Randy is blowing bubbles again huh?

Hey Handsome...youre looking mighy groovy in Halloweeny Orange. *L*

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2003-10-27 07:59 AM

your way with words amazes me Sey, I enjoyed this much for my morning. Happy day to you hon.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

5 posted 2003-10-27 08:06 AM

I believe you are seeking that pot of gold at the end of a rainbow....

Good Morning Sir...
Lauren~

Will the wind ever remember the names
it has blown in the past with
its crutch its old age and its widsom
it whispers no this won't be the last

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2003-10-27 08:58 AM

JM,
I think Randy need a new suit. His old one is starting to show its age. LOL
Thank you Tink for the wink.
WWRS

Gentle Spirit
Thank you sweet and the top of the morning to you. Hugs

Greeneyes
Me thinks you have a point. LOL

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2003-10-27 09:09 AM

Bubbles are like anything else
that contain magic, Sy...
they will always be
what you make of them...

and you make yours fly mighty high...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2003-10-27 09:18 AM

Oooh loved your morning verse Sy!
And, you do look great with this lovely orange background.
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

9 posted 2003-10-27 09:21 AM

My Dear Mr. T., I'll get back to reading the rest of the poem, but the following gave me cause to pause! lol

"A bubble on a wayward thrust
To burst upon a touch of lust"

~ Seek and ye shall find!

Angel huggums,
EA

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

10 posted 2003-10-27 09:39 AM

A leap of joy and some romance

Don't we all? *S*

I like this very much, my friend. *S*

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

11 posted 2003-10-27 09:57 AM

Loved the metaphor, loved the write.

Jason

Paul Wilson

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since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

12 posted 2003-10-27 10:59 AM

Seymour...Tender touching write. Enjoyed...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

13 posted 2003-10-27 11:55 AM

Well now ... I have to tell you the visions that this brought to mind there son. First off this man running around in his birthday suit was cute, but blowing bubbles? Oh my! Then the metaphors overtook me and the sadness of the soul draped that body in a sheet of lonliness, and I wanted to hug that person to death, yes I did. Hey - orange suits you!

Miss you both.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

14 posted 2003-10-27 11:57 AM

"I seek it with a passions flute
Within my call and birthday suit"

LMAO...OMG! I loved that!

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

15 posted 2003-10-27 12:03 PM

Sunshine
And you are a sigh in my eye, LOL

Nancy,
Morning hugs and tea, what could be better.

Earth Angel
" Seek and ye shall find!"
That could mean alot of things. LOL

suthern,
Glad you liked.

Jason,
Loved the read and your reply.

Paul,
Thank you for the read and enjoy.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

16 posted 2003-10-27 12:57 PM

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

17 posted 2003-10-27 01:33 PM

Mysteria
Lovely reply, we miss you too.

from both of us.

passing

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