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wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2003-09-24 01:11 AM

Where’s the point to prick upon disaster
if worlds like mine are rounding ever faster?
As sun is me and you my earth in hand
quote countless lines we only understand.
Pray this foremost: ‘never blink an ocean’,
souls, you’ll rend, are molecules in motion.
As I, the sun that ripples in the pond,
finger-smoothe you’re hardness 'til it's gone.

Pounce lithe cat, you’re purple eyes are keen.
It’s even said that everything you’ve seen
has fevered pitch to guide your primal hunt.
But this that lasts forever you should want?
Upon my heart, your grazes do not dull
as are the eyes that see not from the skull.
In forth where men must lead no more attack
you swat those feeble giants to the back.

Life that leaves so gently in the night
still to shine so truthful out of sight.
Oh tree that grows above and in the ground
to rot and tangle time, it makes no sound.
A moth steps softly 'long the boney bark
fears not the maiden nor the meadowlark.
Only edging toward this notion of a sun
of warmth which life has told and yet begun.

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (09-24-2003 11:03 AM).]

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-09-24 01:46 AM

very well enjoyed,,,

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

2 posted 2003-09-24 05:56 AM

Another great write from you Walty... have miss you.

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2003-09-24 06:01 AM

Great to see you again, Walty.
I enjoyed this.
Hugs,
~Vicky
When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

4 posted 2003-09-24 08:23 AM

thank you threew for reading this and commenting. i love to write so much but just never have the time for peace.

cruz
Member

since 2000-07-18

Posts 282
Dallas,Texas USA

5 posted 2003-09-24 11:03 AM

i 'specially like the tree tangling time and the bug headed toward the sun. definitely worth another read...............
cru

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2003-09-24 11:12 AM

Peace...hie yourself off to Walt's world now...

because we've missed him, yes, indeedy do!

Welcome home, Walt. As ever, this is full of worldly wisdom...thank you!

Insomniac Cat
Member

since 2003-09-23

Posts 69
The Land of the Dadaists

7 posted 2003-09-24 12:21 PM

I LIKE it! Your rhythym structure is awesome, and the topic is "surreal". Great job!

"Pounce lithe cat, you’re purple eyes are keen."

Great line!

[This message has been edited by Insomniac Cat (09-24-2003 12:22 PM).]

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