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SweetSerenity
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0 posted 2003-10-26 07:33 PM



Alone I stand in the rain
As it gently cascades on me
Each drop representing the hurt
My heart has felt
Eyes closed, I feel it on me
As it becomes one with my tears
The rain falls harder
Searching for my ailing soul
Pieces of my broken heart
Join each raindrop
Slowly falling to the ground
My body is gradually getting weak
I’ve endured too much trauma
It has finally reached an end
The last dropping piece will confirm
I shall never love again
My soul eternally lost in a dark hole
This body is now but a hollow core
I gently open my eyes and see
The last piece of my heart
Trying to find a last hope
Showing the desire to live
Willing me to give it that last chance
Shall I love again?
Fate has told me I shall
I will love the last piece of my heart

~A touch of Sweetness . . . . . A lifetime of Serenity~

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Gaia
1 posted 2003-10-26 08:35 PM


ah, primal first love


sad, yet somehow?
it leaves the door wide open

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2003-10-27 04:45 AM


a beautifully sad write
SweetSerenity
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3 posted 2003-10-27 05:38 PM


Thanks for the words.
I've been gone for awhile, but now I'm back and looking forward to all the talented writing that I'v missed so much!

~A touch of Sweetness . . . . . A lifetime of Serenity~

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2003-10-28 06:57 PM


Really nice...James
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