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Open Poetry #29

Today...

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

0 posted 2003-10-26 04:29 PM

Today is just sunrise past yesterday
A sunset before tomorrow
A number past last year
And a feeling all the same

Still alone…
I walk within the shadows
And hold my head up high
To be blinded by the sun.

For there within eclipses
I can feel

And so I walk inside today
Between the figures
In a place that feels everything
Where nothing is at all.

[This message has been edited by GG (10-26-2003 10:08 PM).]

arthur
Senior Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 678
england

1 posted 2003-10-26 04:38 PM

i liked this very much
like mood music -is says more than the sum of its parts
arthur

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-10-26 04:40 PM

Very powerful poem here.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-10-26 05:02 PM

(sigh) Wow, I love all the walking contradictions in this, sweet friend, everything is a contradiction in my mind and there's nothing wrong with that, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alyssa, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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