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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2003-10-25 11:14 PM




As it rains,
I am wandering parameters of spaces sacred
Drawing breaths of clean pure night
Drizzled jewels upon the glass
Become my own adornments
From my hand the streams of outside
Beading on my skin and willing
Southbound destinations
Following the curve

Giving way to thirst
The window raised in anticipation
Sleep will be easy

Taking with me
As the moist of clearly there
Upon cool sheets
The heaviness of darkening rooms
Spellbound in warm candle scents
And lullaby in steady pattering
My mind is freed

Sometimes certain, sometimes not
Transformations of the drops
Melting into firelight as steam
Beneath the velvet cloak of found
And peace is mine
In seas of blankets, listening to rhythms soft
Your arms surround me
Once enchanted, now recalled
Aglow against my heart

Copyright Kkh 10/25/03



[This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (10-25-2003 11:17 PM).]

© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
ecrivan
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1 posted 2003-10-25 11:58 PM


Quite touching Kathleen..enjoyed


Duncan
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2 posted 2003-10-26 12:12 PM


"Sometimes certain, sometimes not
Transformations of the drops
Melting into firelight as steam
Beneath the velvet cloak of found
And peace is mine"

I loved this!  Very good to read you again TD.  

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3 posted 2003-10-26 01:13 AM


wonderful imagery
Magnus
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4 posted 2003-10-26 09:28 AM


Now,  that is more like the TD that I know.
You can feel the mood of the showers,  yet
at the same time,  another mood is present.

Susan Caldwell
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5 posted 2003-10-26 09:44 AM


"Drizzled jewels upon the glass
Become my own adornments
From my hand the streams of outside
Beading on my skin and willing
Southbound destinations
Following the curve"

Loved those lines...they do look like jewels on the glass don't they?

This was really wonderful..


"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

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6 posted 2003-10-26 03:45 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, but then again, your poetry always is and has such peace to it! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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