Open Poetry #29 |
Our Love Will Never Age |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Picture by Alan Ayers * * * The first time that I saw you My heart began to race You radiated love and happiness From your warm and friendly face The first time that you held me Safe and warm within your arms Love had claimed another victim As you seduced me with your charms The first time our lips met I felt the passion rise within To have these feelings of desire Must surely be a sin The first time we watched the sun Settle slowly beneath the sea It was at that very moment That your heart belonged to me The first time we made love Beneath the pale moonlight To you my heart surrendered On that balmy Summer's night The years pass by so quickly But our love will never age We look forward to each chapter As we turn another page * * * "In the end, nothing we do or say in this lifetime will matter as much as the way we have loved one another" I am in motion |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sue This is a beautiful passionate romantic positive poem......Very nicely done! Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice to see you writing again Sue. I've missed you. This is a beautiful piece. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwwwwww, this is beautiful, sweet friend, true love is timeless and I wish for this eternal happiness to always sing in your heart, as we are forever young and the children within us all always sing! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: Lovely sentiments and hope this is always true for you! Betty Lou Hebert |
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