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Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07
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With my darkling

0 posted 2003-10-25 04:55 PM


Dances a silly dance,
with no eyes around,
to a drunken spanish guitar solo,
wishing he was somewhere else
wishing he was someone else

can feel the vibrant nothing,
that became an engaged dance
with himself
while he forgot
who he was for an instant
and danced free

[This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (10-26-2003 10:12 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-10-25 06:53 PM




(giggles) Hehehe...stop being so modest, you can dance very well, silly, look at hat, you just did! (smiles) This is so beautifullyb passionate, sweet friend, I love the energy of this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jason, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2003-10-26 01:12 AM


yeah, I can relate
SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
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Somewhere out there~
3 posted 2003-10-26 01:59 AM


:'( So sad.
Love,
Terri~

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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4 posted 2003-10-26 10:07 AM


What wrong with dancing by yourself?  I do it while I clean and I have even been seen moving around to the beat while driving...



"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
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the ass-end of space
5 posted 2003-10-26 09:12 PM


we think too much..damnit
inkedgoddess
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Ohio
6 posted 2003-10-27 12:37 PM


yea
i feel the beat
too

Joyce Johnson
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7 posted 2003-10-27 02:00 PM


Sometimes through no fault of our own, we find ourselves dancing alone.  No reason not to dance.  Love, Joyce
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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New York
8 posted 2003-10-27 03:03 PM


Oh Jesus Jason YES
but doesnt it feel so good
even if fleeting . . .
I love this
xxoo

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