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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Part Of Me Thinks You're The One, Part Of Me Don't Think So (I'll Go 60/40) By: Noah Eaton 10/24/03 Tonight we can be two of a kind I want to be your man I got myself a wired pair And I'm countin' on waking up with a hand Raisin' up the ante, aces up, takin' off the gloves Sweetenin' up the pot, to make a jackpot of your love. She's a honky-tonk angel, she's a 24/7 steel wheel. Countin' up my blessings, she knows just how I feel. Part of me thinks you're the one, part of me don't think so really But I've got to place my bet I'll go 60/40 I've always been a midnight cowboy, hiding the tears under the brim of my hat. She's a queen in her faded blue jeans, she's the soft summer wind rolling at my back. God I love this woman, lord I can sure use some magic tonight. Help me play 'em for keeps, help me make her mine. She's a honky-tonk angel, she's a 24/7 steel wheel. Countin' up my blessings, she knows just how I feel. Part of me thinks you're the one, part of me don't think so really But I've got to place my bet I'll go 60/40 I have to be careful, but I can't be too cautious. Soon love, you'll know you can't resist, all this country lovin' I have to give. She's a honky-tonk angel, she's a 24/7 steel wheel. Countin' up my blessings, she knows just how I feel. Part of me thinks you're the one, part of me don't think so really But I've got to place my bet I'll go 60/40 Oh, what the heck, I'm feelin' lucky tonight, I'm bettin' it all! I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth I can see the sun set and I perceive ***Live*** [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-24-2003 11:49 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome poem Noah Cold hands means a warm heart |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh, what the heck, I'm feelin' lucky tonight, I'm bettin' it all! Now, Noah...THIS is a COUNTRY SONG!!! I'd like to hear the music to it. Have you ever gotten any of your songs copyrighted? I'll bet that you could get some of them recorded by one of the New Country stars...that is if you didn't want to record them all your self.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Smilin at this, what a cool country tune. Yep, bet the whole hand, what have you got to lose? (There's always a spare hidden deck anyway. LOL) |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
I concur with Ethel and Kacy. This should be a very cool country/western song with a cool story and metaphors. Enjoyed. -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Noah, you're great at these! |
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IrishDreamer Member
since 2003-10-18
Posts 55Kansas |
Wonderful I'll be waiting to hear this on the radio soon. ~Angie~ |
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