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Inner Conflict
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Inner Conflict |
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Dajackle New Member
since 2003-09-23
Posts 3 |
hi everyone, i'm new to the forum, just thought that i would share one of a piece that i've written a while back....i'll be looking forward to your responds...hope you'll enjoy it  --------------------------------------------- "Inner Conflict" hear my words like bristling of leaves on twigs in a cool spring morning sun's blinding glare bouncing off a glistenning rock to the twisted rocky road that reads my facial expression my soft-stern hands show the road map of a never ending war the cuts and scars are excursions of natures purity evolving socially with darkened thoughts greed that covers the heart like the sun's rays burning my skin to crisp the smell of cooking cells and lipids are the death of many faces of mandkind each step i walked the world shakes furiously of mental damages heat carrying eyes sore the air like hurtfull words pierce through the minds of innocence continual process life, love, dream, reality, hate, pain, death like the child that's left to shrink of hunger a family burning from the fire of human fear a blazing night in a city of extreme poverty the inferno inside of you to save yet, one does supress that emotion that power to help those in need a song without its melody is simply noise the ability to help without application is another dying day no bristling of leaves on twigs no joyous chatters from village children on a sunny afternoon simply silent as though an incubus engulfed nature's melody her voice to scream the leering shrieks of pain her foresight to see the lost ones lost in time lost track of time lost, for his mind sees that there is no longer time to think but simply act like an irritated caged animal releashed in the jungle of taunting games walking blindedly too many, too cold a goose-bumbps of human conflicts with their inner self lacks the unity the will to live. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Sadly too many manifest the fears and inner demons inside of them and then the battle only gets more severe, dearest friend, I send my prayers out to them all and hope they can rise to hope and the light and set themselves free with faith! This is a powerful debut, sweet friend, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Dajackle, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!    May loe and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Dajackle New Member
since 2003-09-23
Posts 3 |
thanks for the warm welcome, this site have some unique styles that interest me...and i'll gladly post more in the near future |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Hard, clean, and well worth the reading. You I will most definitely watch for, from now on! Welcome aboard -- we need folks like you. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Dajackle New Member
since 2003-09-23
Posts 3 |
thank you, and im glad you enjoyed it |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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