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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-10-24 10:35 PM


You love another
But not me anymore
You dream of her
And dream of me no more

It's over
I have hand enough
I can't take this anymore
So I will waste no more time on you
Show your love to the other woman
Because your not getting anymore
From me

Cold hands means a warm heart

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ThunderMage
Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
1 posted 2003-10-24 10:38 PM


I like this poem, but you're giving up that easily?

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
2 posted 2003-10-24 10:43 PM


Amen, my friend ... as it should be!

Great


jwesley

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