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Who Is This Girl
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Who Is This Girl |
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ethier New Member
since 2003-05-20
Posts 6ajax,ontario.canada |
In a dream I see her there Standing; Standing all alone She calls my name But i'm not there Who is this girl with the long blond hair It's not me; it can not be She's calling for me but i'm not there In a dream I see her there Crying; Crying all alone She pleads for me but i'm not there Who is this girl In this dark dank cave Water splashing all around her She's pleading; pleading for me but i'm not there In a dream I reach for her Reaching; Reaching but i'm not there In her long white dress Fading; Fading then she's not there Who was that girl with the long blond hair Calling; Crying; Pleading; Fading I'm Reaching; Stretching but she's not there Who was that girl with the long blond hair |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Like a song...Welcome to Passions! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggsssssss) Oh Ethier, this is a most heartfelt and honest debut, sweet friend, I believe many of us have these dreams and I suppose the answer just comes in time! God Bless You, sweet friend, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Ethier, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethier, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Not just a poem, an experience -- you are good! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Ethier, I enjoyed your first post and look forward to reading more of your poems. I hope that you enjoy it here at Passions In Poetry. and welcome...  Hugs to you  Ethel garysgirl |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Welcome to Passions and thank you for sharing your talent with us. "If I never met her, I would have dreamed her into being" Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
terrific first post,, welcome to PiP |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
she is the stream of perfection, within me a valuable experience and wisdom gained welcome to passions and please keep on writing! |
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ethier New Member
since 2003-05-20
Posts 6ajax,ontario.canada |
thank-you everyone for your replies,i enjoy reading your comments |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Liked this alot. Welcome to pip I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A very nice entrance to Passions. Welcome! I hope you enjoy your time in these pages of blue as much as we all do! I must have had my momma's will |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Ethier, an interesting write. I like the style... it leaves you wanting to know who this girl is. So who is she? Post more.... Parker |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
dream people... And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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mytuesdaywishes Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254a voice from the musicbox |
good stuff, good rhythm...did you ever figure out who that girl was? and even when everything was wrong, and we were mad at the world, it was still beautiful. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read  |
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dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
Wow.....I hope you find her......I would like to meet her myself! Larry |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
If not someone you already know, perhaps you'll be meeting her very soon...James |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to Passions! Enjoyed your opening post. I look forward to reading more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
There's a haunting quality to this...love the use of repetition. Welcome to Passions |
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ethier New Member
since 2003-05-20
Posts 6ajax,ontario.canada |
thank you everyone for your reply,and to the curious..the dreams started at a very young age when my sister and i were seperated,i had no idea who she was but she found me about 6 years ago...thank you all again |
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