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A Sifting
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A Sifting |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A Sifting I weary moments sifted through And those of new that brought the coup They disappear into the mist Into the memories file and list Into the well of changing time They drift into a pantomime And there they mortar fantasy Within a waters argosy They’re gone and yet they are not gone Some are sound and some are torn And some are placed so still and deep You cannot trace them when you sleep And there they sanctum in the well The dwell of phantoms and dispel To fill a pasture full of gleams Of knights and queens within our dreams I do not say that all are good Just that they, be understood |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
you are incredibly full of images and ideas...those wheels of yours are constantly turning....always a pleasure to read you first thing in the Morning...Thank you & Good Morning Sy Sending many wishes along for you and yours...have a wonderful day and weekend ahead! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ There are few pleasures that remain in my mist and your comments are on the top of my list.  have a good one. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And there they mortar fantasy Within a waters argosy ============================ and that will be me waaaay cool line of the day.  I do so love to walk in the mist of your mind...barefoot of course  *ww*   |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM "barefoot of course," WWRS I hope things are going well at home. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, my darlin' Monsieur Tumbleweed! ~ I'd love to be able to sift through your file and list of misty memories. Oh, the treasures that I could find!  Dream deep! Dream sweet! Here's a beddy-byes for you tonight!EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Into the well of changing time They drift into a pantomime And there they mortar fantasy Within a waters argosy" Morning Sy! My favorite stanza? The one above. My favorite morning guy? Why you of course! Loved the morning write this TGIFriday Sy! Have a funtastic weekend. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ [This message has been edited by Enchantress (10-24-2003 08:45 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I adore your mists in sift. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel I return the favor with intrest. Nancy, Good morning love. Sunshine, I'll send you a little sifted mist. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
They’re gone and yet they are not gone Some are sound and some are torn And some are placed so still and deep You cannot trace them when you sleep This verse really stands out for me Sey, enjoyed this much. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit You have become my gentle spirit. |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Love this Seymour. Great flow to the poem. Love the rhyme scheme too. Wonderful job. Very intriguing write. I wish I had penned it. Oh well I can draw from the idea and find my own muse. Thanks! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Evocative, Enjoyed your comment, thank you. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
 Never forgotten, the memories marinate to make a life more flavorful. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
I think I understand,Sy...captivating write. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pilgrimage marinate, good word, enjoyed the comment. scorpio Glad you enjoyed the poem. thanks for the read and reply. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
I'm with Enchantress--especially liked the second verse, but the whole poem was beautifully written. Your talent puts me in awe. Sadelite |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Sy, and there's nothing I enjoy more than to read your gifts to us all here!! I love your phraseology, and your images that fill my head with emotions!! Ok, I just love the way you write!!!!! ~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sadelite A very nice comment and I thank you much. Sunnyone OK I love the way you reply. |
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