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Open Poetry #29

Take Me Home

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

0 posted 2003-10-24 12:10 PM

Take Me Home

Crazed by the beer,
not to mention the Jack Daniels,
I see you as beautiful
on the bar stool beside me.

I see you as all the wondrous things
I’ve ever imagined a woman could be,
and I want you desperately – and worse,
I need you beyond your wildest dreams.

Another beer,
another JD,
and I’m insanely in love
with the way your mascara has smudged your cheek,
the taste of your lipstick,
your perfume – god, your perfume . . .

Another beer,
to hell with the Jack,
take me home,
take me home,
so we can consummate
our anniversary.

w.james beard, jr.
(c) october 2003

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

1 posted 2003-10-24 03:47 AM

Oh.....after playing in bars all these years, I really enjoyed the scenes here!!! And especially loved the happy ending...great write, and one for my 'keepers'.....~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-10-24 04:08 AM

nice one

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-10-24 08:39 AM

Enjoyed this sad refrain James..
Sad smiles with this one...
Hugs~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

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