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Fantasy Dances
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Fantasy Dances |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Sweeping rhythms carry with them magical sensations Gathered at the waist and lead into a waltz of sweet relations Coral colored lights that flicker in the fine of steps Knocking on the door of charms in tiniest of ivory taps With each note, by beat the racing rivers flow Tango to the undercurrents, taken soft to tempo slow An invisible discussion where the body hears the sound Freeing every inhibition to discover air unbound Close together, in the heat of lightest consequences Following the lead, and lead away from cool pretenses Sheer upon the skin the glaze of heaven’s lathered chance Looking with the heart into the hour as lovers dance Copyright Kkh 10/23/03 |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Kathleen, a lovely piece that waltzed beautifully across the page. Very much enjoyed the read. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
as enchantress said and I especially liked the very last line which wrapped everything up so perfectly. jwesley |
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