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jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

0 posted 2003-10-23 05:00 PM

She more than loves Him
if her love were to wear a name
it would have to be
adore.

From the heat of hell’s fire
singed reasoning tarnished
and blackened her heart.
She was lost.
Righteousness suffered
unto its ultimate demise.
From beyond mislaid,
or misplaced, even past nowhere
to be found
with His love
her spirit was restored.

Compromise owned
her conclusions and hope
was dead and buried.
A ‘worthless deed’ wears
a weighty misnomer
for at forty three
she owed a debt with
exponentially compounding
penalties.
With His life her debt He repaid.
With his blood
He forgave.

Yes, she more than loves Him
her devotion lends easily to
adore.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-10-23 05:03 PM

she owed a debt with
exponentially compounding
penalties.

~*~

I waited.
I wasn't disappointed.
Nope.

Do it again.
Soon.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-10-23 05:09 PM

well worth the wait!

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

3 posted 2003-10-23 05:39 PM

absolutely.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-10-23 05:45 PM

"she owed a debt with
exponentially compounding
penalties.
With His life her debt He repaid.
With his blood
He forgave.

Yes, she more than loves Him
her devotion lends easily to
adore."

Oh do I love this!!
Yes!! Well worth the wait..
may we have more please?

~Smiles & Hugs~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2003-10-23 06:03 PM

JellyGirl~
This is breathtakingly beautiful~
Such reflective thoughts~
So enjoyed~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

6 posted 2003-10-23 06:50 PM

thank you all so much....now...do you all mind taking a poke at my muse so she will not go back to sleep?
*smile*
am so glad you all enjoyed

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

7 posted 2003-10-23 07:10 PM

Breathtaking....

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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8 posted 2003-10-24 09:26 AM

[Consider this the response
to an erstwhile poke in progress]

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

9 posted 2003-10-24 09:30 AM

Indeed, it was worth the wait!

I hope your muse stays awake!

Susan

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

10 posted 2003-10-24 12:37 PM

A poke at your muse? *G* I was ready to hunt her down with a butterfly net when I saw your post vanish yesterday... but this is worth waiting for. *S*

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

11 posted 2003-10-24 02:43 PM

When your muse awakes, she blesses us all with her words! Very well done JB!

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