Will He remember my Birthdate?

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Open Poetry #29

Will He remember my Birthdate?

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

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0 posted 2003-10-23 09:00 AM

Will he remember my birthdate
after brown gray tinting time,
Will he remember me fondly
or tweezered passions rhyme?

Will he sense births breaking air,
with darkness becoming light?
Will he know his influence
have caused the words to write?

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-10-23 03:31 PM

Well, I don't know if he will, but I certainly hope that he does.
Was your birthday recently? Mine was yesterday...the 22nd.
Hugs ( and Happy Birthday)

Ethel

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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2 posted 2003-10-23 03:39 PM

sometimes men aren't too bright....you hafta tell them stuff

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

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Ohio

3 posted 2003-10-23 06:11 PM

will he remember the frying pan going
kerplunk on his head when he doesn't?

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

4 posted 2003-10-23 09:48 PM

Thanks to all for your replies.
   All good points, especially the frying pan, if that were really the case!  (No, my hubby never forgets; he's pretty terrific!!  Matter of fact, he bought me a rhyming dictionary for my birthday.)
  This was written with thanks to a dear old friend for encouraging me to think in words to get my feelings out.

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

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of Depression

5 posted 2003-10-24 09:49 AM

Happy Birthday,
I hope he remembered,
Personally I’m at the age where I forget them
Or try to
Nice poem

Gloom

EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10

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6 posted 2003-10-24 11:46 AM

Loved this little poem Sadelite. Hopethe birthday was a good one.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

7 posted 2003-10-24 04:24 PM

Professor G.
Come on, 62 ain't old! Thanks for your birthday wishes and the pleasant comment.
Sadelite

Sadelite
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8 posted 2003-10-24 04:27 PM

Evocative Verse 2,
Thanks for your kind message. I've read your work, thusly I'm flattered.
Sadelite

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