Open Poetry #29 |
Blue Hue Of The Mythol |
Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Transient, copiuous colours of aquamarine, beryl and azure, surround the floating Mythol bird. Fleeting rays of light, mirror sky, sea. Clear pirecing light of a new early morning. Floating and gently rolling on the top of the sea, the Mythol brings calmness and perfect oness to the sea and sky. Heaven is opened up by the palest of light, floating to the very edge of the world. [This message has been edited by Goldenrose (10-24-2003 03:42 AM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I really enjoyed this read this morning, thanks for sharing. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! what a beautiful scene! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
reading this left me floating a nice feeling at the end of the day to feel so light-hearted |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
GR, a very peaceful and tranquil write, chock full of imagery... |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Even Hughes would be jealous of this poem, your world is so beautiful, I am proud to be in it and part of it, you be the writer my love and i will be the painter of the view you see....through your eyes and my hands..the world will see, feel, taste and hear beauty... xxxxx love ~ARH [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (10-24-2003 03:47 AM).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
I truly enjoyed this beautiful piece and also ARH's reply...wishing you two much happiness...~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~ |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Gentle Spirit..Glad that you enjoyed..thank you...GR.. Dix..Thank you for your kind words of encouragement....Goldenrose... Midnitesun..Glad to give you a feeling of floating and to lighten your day..GR.. Magnus ..Thank you for your kind words..GR ARH...You are the reason i can write calmly and beautifuly, you lift my spirit to produce this kind of work my love....thank you...love....Goldenrose.xxxxxxxxxx Sunny...Glad you enjoyed my words and ARH's reply and our happiness...GR.... ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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