Open Poetry #29 |
Hero's Destiny |
ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
He lights up his cigarette, And he begins to walk away; He knows he's saved thousands Of lives just today. This hero appeared out of nowhere, it seemed, Just to beat the bad guy and save all his friends, Now he's lighting up a smoke and leaving, Seeing his quest at an end. But the quest isn't over yet, They've yet to celebrate this battle; The hero simply walks toward his horse, And nimbly leaps to the saddle. Another puff of tobacco smoke, This one fills the cool night; He smokes but he's my hero, Because he never gave up the fight. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I enjoyed the poem. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Liam, this is powerful, sweet friend, a true hero never gives up the journey or the fight and seeks a destiny! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liam, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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