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ThunderMage
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0 posted 2003-10-22 10:58 PM


He lights up his cigarette,
And he begins to walk away;
He knows he's saved thousands
Of lives just today.

This hero appeared out of nowhere, it seemed,
Just to beat the bad guy and save all his friends,
Now he's lighting up a smoke and leaving,
Seeing his quest at an end.

But the quest isn't over yet,
They've yet to celebrate this battle;
The hero simply walks toward his horse,
And nimbly leaps to the saddle.

Another puff of tobacco smoke,
This one fills the cool night;
He smokes but he's my hero,
Because he never gave up the fight.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

© Copyright 2003 Liam Hall - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-10-22 11:22 PM


I enjoyed the poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2003-10-23 12:13 PM




(sigh) Oh Liam, this is powerful, sweet friend, a true hero never gives up the journey or the fight and seeks a destiny! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liam, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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