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Open Poetry #29

"It"

baseballpoet
Junior Member

since 2003-10-20

Posts 36

0 posted 2003-10-22 05:05 AM

Is it your smile?  Is it your eyes?
Or is it your lips that catch me by surprise?
Whatever it may be, so captivating,
opens my eyes where I can clearly see....i love it.

But its so much more than "it"
Its the way you look at me with those big brown eyes
that lead me down to your very inside...
your heart, your soul, your core.

Is it the way your hair falls on the top of your face,
that takes me to a far off place...
where all my fears and doubts erased?

Or is it just you?  Gentle yet fierce,
honest and sincere.  Distinguished and refined,
the way that you remind
me of the way that I want to be....i love it.

I can't put my finger on "it" but it just may be...
all of the above that makes me fall in love with you.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-10-22 05:32 AM

nice

I remember that "it" though it was a long time ago

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

2 posted 2003-10-22 06:25 PM

Sweet. Lovely words that would melt a girls heart. I read these sweet ones, and always wonder if the person they are intended for ever sees them. What a beautful thing that would be for them.

Love,
Terri~

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

3 posted 2003-10-23 04:56 AM

Very romantic and tender, enjoyed!

Thanks ~ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

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