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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-10-21 11:59 PM


I remember things of innocense
From long ago
My childhood friend
I used to always play with

When I got older
I found out I liked my childhood friend
More than just a friend
And a crush developed oh so long ago

My freind retaliated my feelings back once
But never again did my crush
Show those same feelings again
Which made a pain in my heart

Then my friend moved away
And I remember why now they never showed
How they truly felt
All the abuse they endured
Made them put up a barrier

Now it is the present day
I have moved on in some ways
But when it comes to commited relationships
It is hard to keep them going
Because memories of you keep flowing back

I wish I could move on
But it is hard for me to do so
Now I still have feelings for you
My first crush
And my first love

Oh me
The confusion I have endured
Since you moved away

Cold hands means a warm heart

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ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
1 posted 2003-10-22 12:01 PM


Another look into a true warrior's tortured soul. I'm not the barbarian so many see... it's just what this confusion created for me...

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

KoKo
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since 2003-02-15
Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow
2 posted 2003-10-22 12:02 PM


I can relate to this....alot. Wish I had some way to help...but, me? I just keep shoving those old feelings
down...

down....


down......

Mistletoe Angel
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Portland, Oregon
3 posted 2003-10-22 12:28 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Julie, I have never had a first crush face-to-face so it is hard for me to imagine how it must feel to see someone dear move away, though I know it is heartaching! (sigh) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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