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it's not okay |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought 
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“Don’t wish your life away” She always told me this With flagrant understanding… And I listened, as I disagreed, Then watched the dirge of winds pick up To carry her away. Sure, it was easy then, As someone stood beside me, When hands were there to guide me. But I squint my eyes now And tell them it’s not okay To feel pain again My pursed lips bleed from biting, As I wish my life away... - And so it was that time stood still - (blink, breathe, stand, fight) [This message has been edited by GG (10-21-2003 06:41 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetGirlOfGod~ You have SO MUCH TALENT~ Wishing you lots of *hugs* and health little lady~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Marge, thanks  you're a sweety. I'm not sure how much talent I really have, any I do have is from God alone... and I'm thankful for that. I'd give it up in a heartbeat, though... just to not feel the pain that inspires my writing....Thank you  Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your pain gives birth to such eloquence, but I wish for you a life abounding in joyful experiences that could also inspire such poetic expression.  Loving hugs, Linda |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Alyssa, I too send angel hugs your way and want you to know that you are destined to soar and you will find all your heart desires! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, you are special, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alyssa, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Love it. Great write GG :-) |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
i know this |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
EA, I sure couldn't turn that down I however don't see that in the future, not as long as I'm on the battlefield of earth. Sure wouldn't turn it down though if God wanted to give it to me.... Noah, thank you... I will only find all my heart desires when I reach my home in heaven though. On earth it is my duty to serve and fight, and love, and hurt. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
froggy, Glad you love it and thinks its great! thanks much! Aenimal, somehow... I knew you would. Thanks  Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
bump |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
God, you make me ache |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Aenimal, you're cool no matter what they say Thanks! Dix, I make myself ache..! Its just life I speak of. ...just life. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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