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GG
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Lost in thought

0 posted 2003-10-21 06:33 PM



“Don’t wish your life away”
She always told me this
With flagrant understanding…

And I listened, as I disagreed,
Then watched the dirge of winds pick up
To carry her away.

Sure, it was easy then,
As someone stood beside me,
When hands were there to guide me.

But I squint my eyes now
And tell them it’s not okay
To feel pain again

My pursed lips bleed from biting,
As I wish my life away...


- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

[This message has been edited by GG (10-21-2003 06:41 PM).]

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2003-10-21 07:38 PM


SweetGirlOfGod~
You have SO MUCH TALENT~
Wishing you lots of *hugs* and health little lady~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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GG
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2 posted 2003-10-21 08:09 PM


Marge,
thanks you're a sweety. I'm not sure how much talent I really have, any I do have is from God alone... and I'm thankful for that. I'd give it up in a heartbeat, though... just to not feel the pain that inspires my writing....
Thank you

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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3 posted 2003-10-21 08:40 PM


Your pain gives birth to such eloquence, but I wish for you a life abounding in joyful experiences that could also inspire such poetic expression.

Loving hugs,
Linda

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4 posted 2003-10-21 08:43 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Alyssa, I too send angel hugs your way and want you to know that you are destined to soar and you will find all your heart desires! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, you are special, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alyssa, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

froggy
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5 posted 2003-10-21 10:19 PM


Love it.
Great write GG

:-)

Aenimal
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6 posted 2003-10-21 10:23 PM


i know this
GG
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7 posted 2003-10-22 03:14 AM


EA,
I sure couldn't turn that down
I however don't see that in the future, not as long as I'm on the battlefield of earth. Sure wouldn't turn it down though if God wanted to give it to me....

Noah,
thank you... I will only find all my heart desires when I reach my home in heaven though. On earth it is my duty to serve and fight, and love, and hurt.

Always, Alyssa


- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

GG
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8 posted 2003-10-22 03:18 AM


froggy,
Glad you love it and thinks its great! thanks much!

Aenimal,
somehow...
I knew you would.
Thanks

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Aenimal
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9 posted 2003-10-22 11:13 PM


bump
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10 posted 2003-10-23 03:26 AM


God, you make me ache
GG
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11 posted 2003-10-23 06:37 AM


Aenimal,
you're cool no matter what they say
Thanks!

Dix,
I make myself ache..!
Its just life I speak of.
...just life.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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