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River
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since 2003-09-16
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my own little world

0 posted 2003-10-21 06:19 PM



my heart is pounding
my head is numb
as I stare into your eyes
feel this rush intoxication
that moves through our veins
want to stay like this
forever
wish you would not leave
but time does not slow down
or stop when I am with you
only races more when you are near
as the beat of my heart
when you are gone
it stops
try to forget you...
make the pain go away
but sweet memories
haunt me
wherever I go
sometimes unbearable
when I see you once again
I will be so
overjoyed
dizzy
intoxicated
by love
is it really love?
or just fatal attraction
like a fragile flame
that will go out
at the slightest breeze?
having not loved before
I do not know
but I pray
I plead
that it is either
an immortal sea of flames
or that i remember you no more.


© Copyright 2003 Bonnie Sue Bixler - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2003-10-21 08:42 PM


nice writing Bonnie Sue
Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia
2 posted 2003-10-21 10:33 PM


Great writing here Bonnie.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2003-10-21 11:18 PM




(sigh) Oh Bonnie, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I sure hope it is the former but either way following your heart will always lead you the true direction! (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bonnie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

River
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since 2003-09-16
Posts 627
my own little world
4 posted 2003-10-22 09:58 PM


thanx guys. =)

             - River

              (Bonnie Sue)

Love hurts as bad as it feels good.

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