Open Poetry #29 |
Flame |
River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
my heart is pounding my head is numb as I stare into your eyes feel this rush intoxication that moves through our veins want to stay like this forever wish you would not leave but time does not slow down or stop when I am with you only races more when you are near as the beat of my heart when you are gone it stops try to forget you... make the pain go away but sweet memories haunt me wherever I go sometimes unbearable when I see you once again I will be so overjoyed dizzy intoxicated by love is it really love? or just fatal attraction like a fragile flame that will go out at the slightest breeze? having not loved before I do not know but I pray I plead that it is either an immortal sea of flames or that i remember you no more. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
nice writing Bonnie Sue |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Great writing here Bonnie. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Bonnie, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I sure hope it is the former but either way following your heart will always lead you the true direction! (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bonnie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
thanx guys. =) - River (Bonnie Sue) Love hurts as bad as it feels good. |
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