Open Poetry #29 |
One Love (for wranx and tweets) |
BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
~*~*~ To love like that so freely and deeply to shout it from the roof top and tell the whole world we are so blessed to feel all of this. To walk down the path hand in your hands skipping stones 'cross the river carving your names in the trees breathing in all the goodness to come sweept across the blue sky Wishing on a single star, then have it come true to give the most precious gift holding it dear to your heart and it's all just for you. Keeping rhythm to the same beat and bask in the certainty that it doesn't get any better than this like a soft gentle breeze caressing your face while you sleep. When the seasons change and leafs turn to gold when the snow falls and drifts and spring blooms again and you're not alone anymore. When all that you know and all that you see is the firelight in your lover's eyes is a reflection of you and all that you need. As the velvet moon rises and leans down to kiss holding you close in the night one love in the making celebrated by two. When the morning sun shines and you're right where you need to be a place in heaven on earth where dreams do come true. and they're all about you. ~*~*~ *For wranx and littlewing* Because love is all that, and I'm thrilled for you both. Not to mention it was about time I wrote something happy, and I'm happy for you. [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (09-23-2003 07:20 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful dear Lori! I know they will love this... and ain't love grand!?!! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nicely penned,, i'm sure they will cherish this write,,
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Yes... to shout a love... how beautiful! *S* This is so lovely, lady... the words of joy may be for others... but they look good coming from your pen. *S* |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hey Blues this is beautiful, littleone and Ed will surely love it. Well Done Maree. fate is not just |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lori this is as beautiful as their love is. Very well done bluesy one....missed ya gal... |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Aye, lovin' an' hollerin'..... 'tis a consummation devoutly to be wished.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lori...You've expressed the warm heart that is felt when looking at love. Beautiful! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done Blues lady.... and nice to see you writing... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
BluesSerenade A lovely write It was enjoyed by all. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
Well done Bluesy! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you everyone for reading and for all your good vibes... sometimes we need to step outside of ourselves and find our inspiration in another person's happiness. And I can't help but share theirs... We should all be so lucky!!! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, I'm so happy to see you writing more and more and with joy, sweet friend, every one of your writes are special but this is super-special as Wranx and Tweet will always cherish this and I am so happy for their happiness too! (kiss on cheek) I too wish eternal love happiness for you, sweet Lori, God Bless You and know one love is alwaus with you, one golden love, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth I can see the sun set and I perceive ***Live*** [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-23-2003 09:46 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Lori, this is so sweet and loving. It's so special for you to be happy for LittleOne and Ed and to write this poem for them. I'm sure they will love it. Hugs to you and them Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (09-23-2003 10:47 PM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Bluesygal: you are the most giving person to do something such as this . . . I just got home and lookie here what I found . . . another lovely song from you . . . always singing to me please don't ever stop This is beautiful and My God again, I cannot contain my smile *smiling HUGE here* Thank you Lori, for this and for you and just because . . . I am so honored so so honored by you as Ed will be too *smile* always your tweets Sue xxoo All of you such beautiful people truly |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Friend Blusey! It's wonderful to see you writing and posting. And that you wrote THIS! Good lord, I'm honored, truly! You're the best Lori, Thanks! Ed... |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This is wonderful. Crystal |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
It is wonderful! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Noah!!! Thank you for all those ladybugs and your nice reply. Ethel~ Warm hugs~ Tweets and wranx~ Love that smile of yours little littlewing~ I thank you both for inspiring me. Now wranx, I hear the shack flooded, and you were rewarded with love? There's always a trade off eh? Good for you two~ Crystal and Kaoru~ Thank for the wonderful, wonderful! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
That's so exciting and touching! Beautiful hommage to Ed and Sue. Love sparkles all over the page. Hugs. Margherita |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Lori...don't know how I missed this, but I'm glad I finally found it. This is absolutely beautiful, and such a lovely gift for Ed and Sue. You are a sweetheart. Hugs to you, my friend... When the power of love overcomes the |
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PouringJewels Member
since 2003-09-18
Posts 158Maryland |
I know more than most as Ed is my older brother. I am so thrilled he isn't alone anymore. He is the most reclusive I know and he is finally coming out. I love this man more than life. Thank you for putting it into perspective. It was a true pleasure to read. |
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