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gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-10-21 11:14 AM

I was not the first
nor last
nothing but an in between
of something
and somewhere
he had been
and was to go
a memory for his future

In tall sway of grasses
spying from afar

I was everything I thought I was not

Field where lovers lay
for strolling mind to recollect

..A moment across hours..

How your skin changed in sun
or was it my biased eyes
worn bronze
with the gold of summer afternoon
painted thick
with my content

You were not the first
nor last
to skim my lips
yet the only
to fill every inch
of my understanding
with blue~sky~completion

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

1 posted 2003-10-21 11:20 AM

"You were not the first
nor last
to skim my lips
yet the only
to fill every inch
of my understanding
with blue~sky~completion"

Gemma this is excellent!! Esp. thoses lines above...god..I love this!

Susan

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2003-10-21 11:25 AM

Wow....and so the next time..will be an ever better creation of completion...tremendous write....very powerfully felt.

Good one!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2003-10-21 11:25 AM

"You were not the first
nor last
to skim my lips
yet the only
to fill every inch
of my understanding
with blue~sky~completion"

~ Vintage you! Fantastic writing! --and he will not be the last to fill you so completely!

Loveya, gem drop!
LL

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-10-21 12:45 PM

I always love reading you gemma...

you have such a way

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2003-10-21 04:50 PM

Gemma~
This is wonderful~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
[email protected]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2003-10-21 05:07 PM

"How your skin changed in sun
or was it my biased eyes
worn bronze
with the gold of summer afternoon
painted thick
with my content"

Gemma....the above...and this..oh my!!

"You were not the first
nor last
to skim my lips
yet the only
to fill every inch
of my understanding
with blue~sky~completion"

These lines...make you the fantastic writer you are!!
This is a keeper for my 'Gemma' folder.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2003-10-22 09:28 PM

Lovely...James

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2003-10-22 10:48 PM

(smiles) Yay! Awwwwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, and may this special feeling always shine in you and fill you with a smile forever, you are everything special to us as our friend and so much more! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

9 posted 2003-10-23 12:50 PM

You know I always love your stuff..

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

10 posted 2003-10-23 03:01 AM

this is good
...very good.
I like

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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