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Piano Solo |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Piano Solo another measure in the song of pointlessness sharps raw bladed to make you bleed with razor edges that cut clean to the bone hollow clef pounding chaotic empty notes as ivory stretches to touch black so flat "Tough times never last...tough people do." carol gardner |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Some melodies soothe... others leave nerves jangled... Excellent write... the chord struck isn't one that comforts... but it will be remembered. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlick~ Bluesy tune gal~ Sending *hugs*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a way you have of painting life |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
this is a nice write... regards sudhir |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Much enjoyed this one Helen. Hugs~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Helen, this is beautiful, sweet friend, you always make such soothing melodies and ragtime with your words! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Helen, How come I hear nails on a chalk board? You do have a way with words...  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
OMG you know what this exactly reminded me of Helen? Ok I forgot the name of the composer but that movie with Julia Roberts and her psycho obsessive husband (remember she like faked her death to get away from him?) well one of the last scenes this THIS up there is playing as he finds her aghhhh hair standing up here (must find that tune for you) God this was SHARP xxoo |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
A middle sequence of Chopin, I take it? Keep playing, things will turn smooth again.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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