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Open Poetry #29

Feeling Close To You

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-10-21 05:08 AM

Feeling Close To You

When I'm feeling all alone
thats when I call you
on the phone.
And then I feel so
much better...
because one plus
one makes two.
And when I hear your
sweet voice on the phone
I no longer feel alone,
I feel close to you.

JamesMichael
October21
2003
"Why do birds suddenly appear,
everytime that your near,
just like me, they long
to be, close to you."
Karen Carpenter

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

1 posted 2003-10-21 05:12 AM

Damn. I wish it wasn't 4 AM...

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2003-10-21 05:25 AM

Thanks for responding Koko...its 11:25 p.m. in Hawaii right now...time for me to head home...James

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

3 posted 2003-10-21 05:29 AM

Kind of wish I lived in Hawaii right now, then...Wouldn't be too late to call my love

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2003-10-21 07:38 AM

what a beautiful write, but kind of freaky..don't ask James...whewwwww....
what a jolt you have given me this morning and you don't even have a clue..
SMiles and hugs

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2003-10-21 07:59 AM

James,
Well done, enjoyed the read.

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