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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2003-10-20 03:31 PM

~Taking Flight~

I can't forget that moment
when it was as if the chains
finally broke
and the dark clouds
finally lifted
giving away
to the brightness       of day,

the answer
hidden in the dark skies
only needed to find
that ray of sunshine
to make it reach
further
than it ever had      before

likened to the light
breaking upon a new day
its message arose       so clear
and like a butterfly    taking flight
for the first time

a heart finally found its way~
to forgiveness.

{Reposted for a very special friend...
lady....}

It's better than I could have planned..
it's made me who I am...
{Trace Adkins}

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-10-20 03:35 PM

Now, I wonder how many people
are going to be thinking,
"is this for me?"
because you've certainly found a passle
of poet people who truly enjoy your words...

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2003-10-20 03:39 PM

when I originally wrote this, it was for me as a realization that I ended up writing this, now it is for a friend...
but I think she already knows that....

Thanks hon, love you too!!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-10-20 03:43 PM

Beautiful...truly beautiful Donna.
~Hugs~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

4 posted 2003-10-20 04:20 PM

nice read

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-10-20 09:01 PM

I can't forget that moment
when it was as if the chains
finally broke
and the dark clouds
finally lifted
giving away
to the brightness of day,

And, isn't that a great feeling? Thanks
for sharing this, sweet Donna.

Hugs

Ethel

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2003-10-21 09:02 PM

(kiss on cheek) Yay! Oh Donna, I remember this, sweet friend, and I wish for you to forever fly free over white clouds and with forgiveness and grace at heart, yay! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

7 posted 2003-10-21 10:31 PM

Hello Donna

Your words were absolutely beautiful and I'm sure your friend will love them.

"Happiness is a butterfly, which,
when pursued, is always just beyond grasp,
but which, if you sit down quietly
may alight upon you."

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

8 posted 2003-10-22 12:49 PM

What a blessing for your friend..sending sunshine her way.

Love,
Terri~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2003-10-22 03:37 AM

*nodding with big smile*

beautiful

pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

10 posted 2003-10-22 03:57 AM

beautiful

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