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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
I understood the moment that we talked the instant I heard your voice on the phone I knew in a moment I had lost touch and just a touch was all it would take |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow...short but powerful! |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very well portrayed,,, |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
emotive writing....enjoyed |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
a touch... yes..that's all it takes. Susan |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
came back for another read Bello!  ENJOYED THIS VERY MUCH - oops caps locked! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I trust, you touched?   EA |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
ooh ooh ooh Jason , I know this feeling, Ohh that feeling that it has gone Ohh I do despise it so *hugs* xxoo |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Oh yes...I know this feeling too... Nicely said, Jason... When the power of love overcomes the |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
urgh..argh... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Jason, this is so very heartfelt, sweet friend, I'm so sorry to hear of these rears you're facing, and I too beliee you can tell so much of how someone feels for you by their tone of voice they use! Joanna gave me the slip on New Years Day but before then, there were many times I was worried she didn't care for me anymore! (sigh) I send angel comfort hugs your way, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jason, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Thank you all for read and comments, and no Earth Angel, I have behaved. Jason |
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Gina Culliney Member
since 2003-03-08
Posts 170 |
mmmmmmmmmm... you are truly a flame that draws the moths now aren't you, Darkling. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Jason - you write well about that one special moment, that one special touch... BC |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I was touched by your poem. enjoyed~ARH |
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mytuesdaywishes Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254a voice from the musicbox |
indeed...just a touch...it's never fun to drift away. but life sometimes creeps up on us that way. clear, concise, and to the point. i could learn a thing or two from your style. :Þ and even when everything was wrong, and we were mad at the world, it was still beautiful. |
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