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Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

0 posted 2003-10-19 02:06 PM

Wishing through time
Searching for the just right rhyme
Leavening losing bubbles and steam
Skittering thoughts salient seams
Wrestled with life faltering strife
Rending the fabric of soul
Careening away darkness cried out
Severed streams of thoughts and sighs
Shallow wishing and deepened swishing
Of lightened loads or croaking toads
Not me cried out and ducked the sigh
Words calling running saying “mine”
No matter where I looked it seems
The succulent dreams of love careened
And held us sway with life’s closed yes
Held each one near held oh so near
Don’t bother clouds we need no shroud
So time ran by and called a rhyme
Toppling thoughts claimed all there was
Sometime, we will hold all the thoughts

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

1 posted 2003-10-19 02:09 PM

Your writes are wonderful.

Crystal

Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

2 posted 2003-10-19 02:11 PM

Thanks Crystal - you just made my day - paul

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2003-10-19 02:24 PM

Paul, life may not be a bowl of cherries
24/7...but maybe we get our fair share.

Lots of reflection and hope within this
poem. Nicely done.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-10-19 03:25 PM

(big hugggsssssssss) Oh Paul, this is so wonderfully touching, sweet friend, in time you will find all you are looking for and until then may you embrace the simple blessings, yay! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paul, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

5 posted 2003-10-19 06:39 PM

Golly, I'm not sure I want to hold all of 'em.... some right now that I'd like to get rid of! How about holding 99% of the thoughts and sort-of letting the rest slide....?

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Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2003-10-19 07:56 PM

Paul~

'Rending the fabric of soul'

That says it all for me~
I LOVE this !!!
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2003-10-19 08:01 PM

Hey Paul!!
Love this and great to read you here!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

8 posted 2003-10-19 08:06 PM

Paul...Lots of pondering felt in this thoughtful piece of writing. I hope all is well with you. It's always good to see you here!

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

9 posted 2003-10-19 09:56 PM

Hello Paul

It's so nice to see your happy face and to read your lovely words once more.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

mytuesdaywishes
Member

since 2003-09-05

Posts 254
a voice from the musicbox

10 posted 2003-10-19 10:17 PM

i always know that i could learn something valuable from your words, but i think maybe it's somethings valuable that i should be looking for....always a pleasure

i think that it's brainless to assume that making changes to your window's view will gain a new perspective.

Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

11 posted 2003-10-20 09:42 AM

thanks to all of you for your comments - Paul

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