Open Poetry #29 |
Of The Darkness |
Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
“OF THE DARKNESS” ~~~~ Once I asked if you would meet me behind the moon, to gaze at the stars as they kissed in delicate harmony while we sat in shadows night… It still reminds me of you, and when softness was of your lips as they caressed mine, and hair of silk, as it flowed and touched upon my being… I gazed of the darkness, and found your eyes piercing into mine with the delicacy that is you, and my heart skipped a beat and then started in rhyme with yours… ~~~~ Bill Charles |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh so delicately beautiful Bill! Love this...like a slow dance by two in love. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lovely writing Bill. Good to read you again. *s* |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Free verse suits you... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bill, That write should do it. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You just illuminated the dark side of the moon! Beautiful. Love, Margherita |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a delicate weave of mystery and calm, this was beautifully written |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Once I asked if you would meet me behind the moon, to gaze at the stars as they kissed in delicate harmony while we sat in shadows night… I love this Bill! A keeper for sure! hugs, Chris Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
good write n read,,,
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I gazed of the darkness, and found your eyes piercing into mine with the delicacy that is you, and my heart skipped a beat and then started in rhyme with yours Oh yes, Bill..you know how it feels, don't you? Love is something else, isn't it? Hugs Ethel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"and my heart skipped a beat and then started in rhyme with yours…" ~ so romantically poetic... EA |
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MorninGlory Member
since 2003-08-30
Posts 175Oklahoma |
wishing for the ultimate, the perfection of that one love, oh how I love that feeling. Can we have it more than once in a lifetime? This is so lovely Bill, you write brilliantly, your words must spring from a gentle heart. ~ becky |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Bill, this is beautiful, sweet friend, when you are holding a loved ones hand during the night, the darkness can always be comforting too, yay! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is warm and romantic, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
This poem might be titled "Of The Darkness," but its words were wonderfully bright and beautiful. A truly gorgeous poem about the light of love on your heart. ***Ivy Rose |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Bill: a true joining of souls and my heart skipped a beat and then started in rhyme with yours… absolutely breathtaking You see things in through the out door *smile* xxoo |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
BC, beautiful, just romantically beautiful. And I will be happy to meet you behind the moon. Huggles, Marti Hear Blessings dropping their blossoms all around you. |
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