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Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
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Charlotte, NC

0 posted 2003-10-18 10:02 PM


You Complete Me
Amy M. Kennedy

I've seen mountains and oceans of blue
Experienced a lot in this life for my young age
But I've never met someone like you
You're like a familiar book…I want to keep turning the page

You complete me, with you I feel whole
When we are apart, I feel broken in half
You sweetly captured my heart and soul
We started out separate, now travel the same path

We've both experienced so much pain
Life deals some cruel blows
The day I met you, my life was never the same
In everything you do, your love clearly shows

Together we are as one
Apart we are lost, tossed out to sea
This love is too powerful it can't be undone
Forever, I will love you my sweet darling

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

© Copyright 2003 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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since 2001-10-10
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1 posted 2003-10-18 10:29 PM


Who could ever leave the side of one who
writes so honestly and sincerely of their
love and adoration....  

Nicely done Amy...

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2003-10-18 10:53 PM


Yes, yes, I am a firm believer that good things happen to good people.  Your happiness shines through this, and I share your joy.
Smiling at you dear Amy~  


Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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3 posted 2003-10-23 07:47 AM


very nice Aimster so heartfelt!
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