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Unspoken Words--(Proudly with Sunshine)
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Unspoken Words--(Proudly with Sunshine) |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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{but I speak the words aloud} A tapestry of color falling-- here, the whisper of autumns air can be heard what catches my heart are the colors in brilliant and I pale beside them and all I have is adoration to give Colors at the end of light against some horizontal edge roses and orchids sprinkled among the mix-- stars and midnights moons blue is just a color an endless sea, a painting sitting in the space of heaven narrow mist of the unmistakable hush The scent of rose like the scent of a woman as mysterious as a falling star all things surrounding one with the mist who will catch me in descent? Should I write of this now? or wait until first snow fall, when skies are gray, bursting with cold ice I wonder what waits hidden, - from what my eyes might see; {maybe} wicks of candles melting slowly he promised warmth in winter {but if I speak the words aloud} will this spell be cast aside? Is this how the dream will end? Will the wind ever remember |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I wonder what waits hidden, - from what my eyes might see; {maybe} wicks of candles melting slowly he promised warmth in winter {but if I speak the words aloud} will this spell be cast aside? Is this how the dream will end?" ============================================ Bravo ladies!! How very beautiful this is! Two of Passions finest together to create a wonderful work of art. ~Hugs to you both, Nancy~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"what catches my heart are the colors in brilliant and I pale beside them" *sigh* Beautiful! "if you won't let me fall for you |
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IrishDreamer Member
since 2003-10-18
Posts 55Kansas |
A beatiful spell you have cast over this reader. Wonderful |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big group hug) Yay! Awwwwwwwww, your wonderful words ae such a wonderful tea, sweet friend, with Lauren's imagery and Karilea's musely voice, yay! (smiles) Through so many unspoken words, you sure spoke many of them with wit, yay, God Bless You Both, we all love you so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Lauren and Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you both! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Excellent one ladies....and NO, don't speak aloud the words....for you will wake all of us who are dreaming with you!! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
stars and midnights moons blue is just a color an endless sea, a painting sitting in the space of heaven narrow mist of the unmistakable hush I hope you know that you two are a couple of my favorite ladies, this is pure poetry in motion...and it's about that motion that made me want to get up and dance on the table. So fine, you two~ |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautifully written Cold hands means a warm heart |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Colors at the end of light against some horizontal edge roses and orchids sprinkled among the mix-- stars and midnights moons blue is just a color an endless sea, a painting sitting in the space of heaven narrow mist of the unmistakable hush Oh Lauren and Karilea, this is stunningly beautiful....... Blue is my favorite color, and I could see misty blue clouds, it seemed, as I read. Just beautiful. Hugs to you both  Ethel |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lauren, you most certainly made my Saturday. The weaving of this, drawing color and light from one another, was simply wonderful in the task, and a delight to behold. I always thought it would be enjoyable to write with you - now I know. I want to do it again, when you have time, please! NancyLee, if you ever get the opportunity to duet with this woman, you'll experience a true camaraderie! Thank you Susan, for reading! IrishDreamer, so glad you enjoyed this with us. Noah, bless your heart. There is power in the whisper, Magnus - and Lauren whispers very well. What a lovely compliment, Bluesy. Thank you so much. Thank you, Julie. Ethel, I would encourage you to duet as well with Lauren when you have time...she is a jewel in those clouds you love. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
This is beautiful, you two. I was thinking about winter and autumn colors yesterday...all day, it seems...which was brought on by a song blowing in my mind. And now I think your poem just whispered a title for mine. Thanks! A beautiful inspiration, ladies. I'm going back for another read. Patricia |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Greeneyes & Sunshine, One never knows does one, well done, enjoyed. |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Proudly is right! You and Sunshine are two of this groups finest, and this lace you've woven is simply exquisite. And that dream -- however long it may lasts, it is possible to wake and find that it has come true. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
bravo! well done indeed... |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Karilea~ ANYTIME!!! and thank you for taking time to do this...  you have such a lovely way about you...hugsssss dear lady...~~~~~~~~~~~~ Thank you all for taking your time to read, and enjoy this... I think I can speak for both when I say we had a great time doeing this, and appreciate you all much!Have a great day all.... Lauren~ Will the wind ever remember |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A tapestry of color falling-- here, the whisper of autumns air can be heard what catches my heart are the colors in brilliant and I pale beside them and all I have is adoration to give Colors at the end of light against some horizontal edge roses and orchids sprinkled among the mix-- stars and midnights moons blue is just a color an endless sea, a painting sitting in the space of heaven narrow mist of the unmistakable hush The scent of rose like the scent of a woman as mysterious as a falling star all things surrounding one with the mist who will catch me in descent? ===================== *printing this one out* two of my fav poetesses lacing their words together with such delicate ponderings..I didnt want it to end. Beautiful collaboration me girlies.  "I've still got sand in my shoes |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lauren and Karilea This is a work of art!  |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This is stunningly beautiful and amazingly wonderful.Two of the finest here at Passion's weaving ther words together delicatley to make the lace of the most wonderful words. Crystal |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow...what a pair! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
do you both know how much I love you oh yeah....and your writing too!! seriously guys...you know how I feel  and there is nothing more beautiful than this offering from you both... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
one of your best loved it |
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