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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
That warming ripple that eludes the eye in caverns sub A kind of welcome to the world of fires hidden of Too quickly grazed, negated to be less than what it is The very nature of a most attractive power this Provocative in ways that seem to echo silken sheath The kind of recognition that will make the heart believe So simply and so often disregarded as a thrill The very essence of a love that pulses even still That sensual remembrance in the less of seen expose A talented, remarkable occurrence when it shows Uncovered only after visibility has cleared The very undergarment of true passion shyly sheered Perhaps so few have felt it, as to make it mystical Drawn upon the surface only after shadows fall In the see through of emotions such a glitter to behold As to warm the soul completely and replenish loves enfold Copyright Kkh 10/17/03 [This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (10-18-2003 07:14 PM).] |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
This was wonderful TD!  "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful as always Kathleen. Hugs~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
On a roll again, so completely on a roll again.. (Sing it girl!!) And the bells, they will toll again.... Yeeeeeahhhhh, on a roll again... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Provocative in ways that seem to echo silken sheath The kind of recognition that will make the heart believe So simply and so often disregarded as a thrill The very essence of a love that pulses even still hmmmmmmmmmmm... Understated? Perhaps! Beautiful poem Kathleen, as always~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Understated indeed....What wonderful metaphors to bring the complexity of the theme alive. Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ThisDiamond A lovely write, enjoyed the read. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Beautiful, sensous, and wonderful.Just like the writer.  Crystal |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Provocative in ways that seem to echo silken sheath The kind of recognition that will make the heart believe So simply and so often disregarded as a thrill The very essence of a love that pulses even still That sensual remembrance in the less of seen expose A talented, remarkable occurrence when it shows Uncovered only after visibility has cleared The very undergarment of true passion shyly sheered Oh my, Kathleen, this is so beautifully sensual. I thouroughly enjoyed reading it.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Understated, indeed. This has layers that only a practiced eye may perceive. Almost like a chocolate torte... a delightful read, Miss Kathleen... |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
I indeed found such meaning here, Kathleen. I do know that this poem has been on the forums for a couple of days now...each time I logged on, I meant to stop, but something always got in my way. I have to wonder now, if the universe held this one for the timing of your words couldn't be more perfect. Understated, but beautifully overflowing with wisdom. Patricia |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathleen~ You are such a remarkable poetess~ Every read of you is a pleasure for me~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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