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Open Poetry #29
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Ku'uipo
Junior Member
since 2003-09-25
Posts 42
0 posted 2003-10-18 03:00 PM


Let's create the cosmic dream
Love ecclectic, chaotic, real
Impermiable wonder, indescribable state
Of livid serenity, honest true
Mass emotion, feeling minute
Cringing, twisting, inside out
Lip to cheek, tongue to mouth
Breathless enlightenment, outside in
Cornered in a vast universe of
Me and you, you and me
Were meant to be, a pictured pair
Of hopeless devotion, starcrossed, rare
Friendless foes of insanity clear
Picked from the sky, star to my heart
The romance unseen was meant to be
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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2003-10-18 06:41 PM

Picked from the sky, star to my heart

that's a great line!

Love like that is a rare find,
hope it becomes a reality for you,  
and treats you kindly.
the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2003-10-18 06:44 PM

This was beautiful. Made me smile.

Cold hands means a warm heart
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