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Open Poetry #29

Secrets lay beneath

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

0 posted 2003-10-18 01:18 AM

If the whole world were to look into my eyes,
would they ever be surprised?
The secrets that lay beneath, the blanket of deceit,
chills run down my spine, to feel the comfort of this time,
Amazed at my transition, I couldn't even mention,
the mystery of my fate, I've turned around to late,
If the temptations of the sweet would just quit
making me dive in so deep, I could go on and not be weary, but I stumble upon the moutain block,
yet even now I know I'm caught, does time erase the images in my head, or do I simply turn my face,
erase the images that I see, blinded by such rage,
Love forgives so I have heard, does it speak kind of lust that does not belong to me,
I simply make a plea to understand the misery.
I saught refuge yet found no sheltor,
Rain soaked me to the core, now I have no common ground just settled in to some small spot, but nothing gained but Have I lost the will? only time will heal or seal my fate.

[This message has been edited by Rosebud1229 (10-18-2003 01:22 AM).]

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2003-10-18 02:11 AM

Good honest writing Rosebud...
I can so relate to this.

I think we all have at least one skeleton in our closet and/or a dragon to slay.

Hey, just in time to go haunting for Halloween! I'm getting scared now!

Well anyway, I really liked this poem you wrote. Thanks~

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (10-18-2003 02:16 AM).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-10-18 03:35 PM

I simply make a plea to understand the misery.

~*~

Yes, all we can do
is make an attempt to
understand that which we
do not.

I enjoyed the read of this. Thank you.

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

3 posted 2003-10-19 12:37 PM

hey thx, sometimes it really helps to write brings out the inner most thoughts often ones we know we don't want to reveal.

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