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Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2003-09-23 09:40 AM

Moistured Release
~*Marge Tindal*~

You are the tear
I refuse to cry
in the shed
of harsh goodby~

It would be
my fervent plea
that need for tear
cease to be~

Clinging to lash
in gentle recall
of a time ...
that special time
when we mattered
most of all~

Turn around ...
you will find me
holding back
moistured release
of you~

Ah, just one of those rainy day writes~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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bashlovesemma
Junior Member

since 2003-09-23

Posts 25

1 posted 2003-09-23 09:46 AM

simply brilliant

.. keep it up

-wish i new sum emotions and colour- my posts look borin :p

Take care-
ps EXELENT POEM

Marty Baird
Member

since 2003-09-20

Posts 90
Georgia, U.S.

2 posted 2003-09-23 09:48 AM

I enjoyed reading your poem
& thank you for it.

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2003-09-23 09:57 AM

Beatiful write on this rainy day. Well done Margie gal. Hugs.

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

4 posted 2003-09-23 10:00 AM

I like the way you did this one. The idea that releasing the tear is releasing the loved one-I like that.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2003-09-23 10:07 AM

It's OK to remember...
it's called Life...

thank you, Marge.

Betty
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since 2002-08-13

Posts 1159
Virginia

6 posted 2003-09-23 10:07 AM

Marge this is so pretty. I love it.
Love ya,
Betty

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2003-09-23 10:17 AM

Marge
A good rainy day write, enjoyed

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

8 posted 2003-09-23 10:20 AM

Marge, this is just lovely, achingly...
~K~

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

9 posted 2003-09-23 12:57 PM

Softly melancholic and beautifully written.
Love, Margherita

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

10 posted 2003-09-23 01:02 PM

raining here on my side of fla too marge...h

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

11 posted 2003-09-23 01:27 PM

very nice ma'am... very nice indeed..

Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

12 posted 2003-09-23 01:46 PM

Marge you do write such beauty and thought provoking poems.Love your work.
Love Bon-Bon

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

13 posted 2003-09-23 02:48 PM

Immense appreciation to each of you for letting me know you enjoyed this rain-stained little piece~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
[email protected]

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

14 posted 2003-09-23 04:19 PM

Turn around ...
you will find me
holding back
moistured release
of you~

Ah, lady... This shows the beauty and tenderness of your heart...

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

15 posted 2003-09-23 06:40 PM

Dear Marge: Such a touching piece and I loved every line!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

MorninGlory
Member

since 2003-08-30

Posts 175
Oklahoma

16 posted 2003-09-23 07:30 PM

Very tender poem, touching, has a gentle swell to it -

~ becky

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

17 posted 2003-09-23 07:34 PM

I love those rainy days, and love this write.
Just beautiful, Marge
Hugs,
~Vicky
When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

18 posted 2003-09-23 07:35 PM

Unfortunately...they don't always turn around. James

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

19 posted 2003-09-23 07:37 PM

So tender with such an ache of longing.
Well done Marge.
~Hugs~

~ I love your glances meeting mine
across forever or the room ~

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

20 posted 2003-09-23 08:35 PM

Very nice, Marge! A rain day can sure be depressing.

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

21 posted 2003-09-23 08:40 PM

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

22 posted 2003-09-23 09:08 PM

We need some rain, Marge....you want to do that little rain dance for me?

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

23 posted 2003-09-23 09:16 PM

My My !
Talk about surprised at the reception this little piece has garnered ...
Thank you all~
I'll be standing in the rain again real soon~

*Tee-Hee, MartieSis~
I taught you the rain chant ... get thee to the yard !!
*Huglets* all~
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
[email protected]

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