Open Poetry #29 |
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Eve of Darkness |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA ![]() |
Is but the eve of darkness falls ever silent in flitting sleep. Where ravens walk the edge of light. Where dim the shadows quietly die. Is but the grieve in found recall where loves and lives do then return. Where once was felt and touched so light as flickering fires of candles burn. And once the heart is touched by voice and graze of tips of fingers trace. A vision comes, not chosen choice to wind the stem of rose’s vase. And if the stem does swiftly break upon the tug of lover’s grasp. A need shall rise of thirst to slake before the hands are joined in clasp. For of the sweetness of the dew a tongue shall taste and yearn of more. When sheets are torn and thrown askew beyond the cloak of lover’s door. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, A very good write and a very good read. Enjoyed |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
now..you are writing in gothic mystery..lord man... how is a body like me to try and match your forms??? geez.... ( chuckling) you set the stage well with this Barry and the tone as well as the images become that of gothic romance and mystery... I enjoyed |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Sy, a pleasure to give... Ron...whatcha mean? Sir....you be duh Mannn! For whence the bird does fly amongst the cotton blue. A Captain shall then spy a chosen verse or two... And thence the sail shall fall to cover up the main. As once he shall recall and write...again....again.... |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Speehless. Very haunting and intriging. Enjoyed, SG |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
LOL... Mr. Smooth let words slip from mind and slide the long way down to grace a reader's page while inside the mind they craved to make the words there own and with each sigh he shited tone another key to play notes against some inner harmony he seemed to write one world black against another white barry's keyboard sang while the rest of us just called again! again! Play the words and soothe yeah.. play for us.. Mr Smooth... |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Oh, you silly man....Can not thee see thy own silk upon the once white page. Where muses dance the nightly ball...and thee are known and called "Sage". |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
OK RON....here's thuh deal.... A duet... Youse and Mese..... Whatcha say to that? No ladies, we are not coming out of the closet..... |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Barry...oh goodness, I have to say I believe this to be one of your finest poems. I am going back for my fifth read as soon as I finish praising this. I knew this read would be a great one based on the title...I got the feeling your Poe spirit would grace us again. A keeper, my friend. To the library this one must go! Magnificent! Patricia |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Barry's Introspection .............. Allegory written one can see the inner demon turn in demand You, sir! to Barry's pen it speaks would you have some offering for this thought you penned? One saw only the grin of a shadowed thought pass his eyes and Barry began again to write of things that he would have others see pointing always to where they are but not to where they lie Yet Demons are never still and would drive this man's quill to wear thin the nub each word he scrubbed against the white till smoother than the silken thread it lay upon Barry offered up another poem and his demons cried... their own self doubt denied as those who read his works simply sighed... ![]() |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
a duet? lol... as long as you do not make me rhyme..LMAO... well..ok..I can rhyme... but do I have to??? pick a subject man.. closet? I don't need no stinkin closet!!! [This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (10-17-2003 06:49 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
YES!!! Love this piece Barry.. and also enjoy the banter between you and our Captain. Now.....we await the duet!! YES! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
OK OK....no rhyme....sheesh, ya can't please everyone....ALL the time... Errrr.. subject? Of the main and mast of the damsels cast. Of the briney deep where souls lost do sleep... Tis the topic I feel will paint the portrait real... |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I have a walk-in closet....What? Did I say that?? |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
check you mail bud.... |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ron, my junk filter sent your message into deep space...never to be seen by human eyes. Please send again, I changed the setting on the filter.... Sorrrrry....... and....NO, I am not implying that anything you send me is junk...(you believe that, right???) [This message has been edited by Magnus (10-17-2003 07:07 PM).] |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
this is great. have you been to the dark poetry forums lately or something? =) i just came from there. luvin this poem. =) Love hurts as bad as it feels good. |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
River, thank you...welcome to PiP....and nope, not lately...just strip away the cobwebs from an old brain and there it is. Aching to be written. |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
sent it again... yeah right..I believe your filter was set with a Cpat alert... filter all Cpat mail for lack of intellegence, if not present send to Congress... they are used to it. lol |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sheesh, how did ya know? Back atcha with one... |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Another masterpiece from the master of the quill. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Wow...I love words that have tones of long ago...I enjoyed so much. Very nice. Love, Terri~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry....touching and touched, this, by this...thank you. ![]() |
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